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Just Leave - It's already over by ~pz:iconpz:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional


You were the one that left me,
You were the one whom I asked to stay.
But you left me in crumbles,
Alone, defeated and weary.


You left me to pick up the pieces on my own;
You didn't bothered, you couldn't care.
Emotionally and physically hurt,
Helpless, drained and jaded.


Someone special came into my life,
Showed me rainbows, a myriad of colours;
Showed me what it was like to laugh,
Taught me the music of my heart.


Just when I was in another chapter of my life,
You resurfaced and perhaps wanted something;
You are just a faded memory, nothing significant.
Why can't you just close the chapter -- it's already over.


Learn to move on, like what I have done,
It's no use hoping for a miracle when I've already found mine.
You were the one who left me fending my own fears;
Just walk away and leave me -- it's already over.
©2003-2009 ~pz
:iconpz:

Author's Comments

This is gonna be a long description... Hold on tight...


This poem is written as a sorta emotional outpouring...It's for a particular deviant here, someone who hurt me real bad, physically, emotionally and mentally...I finally was able to pick up the pieces, found the love of my life and thought things would be smooth-sailing...What I didn't expect was for the ex-phile to try and contact me again....


To most of ya deviants, who have been following my Journals and stuff -- you know which guy I'm talking about here....Some of ya might know a lil' more info than the others, some might know I had a bf, but I got dumped by him after 8 days...


Everything was going a-okay...He and I didn't contact each other at all after the entire fiasco ended...I couldn't endure pZ being lost and being un-pZ anymore, I felt as though I had lost my self-worth so I had to pick up the pieces and move on...


~kam1kaz1 told me -- Don't go looking for love, let love come look for you... And I wasn't looking nor hoping for anything, when outta the blue, the sweetest being in the form of my boy/man came into my life...I've never felt this way before about anyone...I feel so loved and he puts smiles on my face like no one has ever done so...And if someone told me 3 months ago that I was gonna feel this way, I'd probably laugh my ass off...But it seems to be true...And it's all thanks to ~ devotedguy... I love my man!


Anyway, just when everything's fine and dandy...the ex-phile had to come back into my life, at least the virtual life and to me, the subtle harassment is kicking in...He has IM-ed my close friend on MSN, asking about me and stuff...I mean, Why bother? when he was the one that dumped me...I'm now happy with my life and I don't need nor want him back! And seriously, I don't wanna have any dealings with this boy anymore, not even in my virtual world, so to solve the problem, I've got to nip the problem in the bud....Cos I don't even want the friendship that's he's dangling...He's not worthy to be my friend.... (This is MY page and I can say whatever I wanna say!)


Thing is, I should just ignore him, but I just don't want things to become more persistant and more incessant, and since I don't wanna interact with him directly -- either via the Internet or in person, I decided to express my thoughts in what i know best -- in a poem...I'm submitting it because he just joined DA and has since left a devious thought and I just want things to stop...Cos i'm very happy, loved and blessed now...I don't need him to come barging into my life and be up to something weird....I don't have the time, nor energy to be playing more mind games with someone I don't wanna be associated with! I'd rather spend the energy on loving my boy/man and on my beloved books!


I'd rather be frank about this than be wishy-washy about him...To ~gabriel06 -- it's over...I don't want your friendship, I don't want ya in my life...Nicely summed up by the title -- Just leave - It's already over...


And your exact words back at you...

May you find the light of your life.


Flame me if ya wanna, I seriously don't bother nor care -- for you're too insignificant for me to get my feathers all ruffled...


~pZ~

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~kindredsoul Dec 30, 2003, 11:11:15 PM
I hope he leaves you alone so that your happiness won't be interrupted by him anymore. Ex-boyfriends are usually dipshits. :nod: As for the poem... it was very well-written. :)
:icongarfield101:
~garfield101 Dec 30, 2003, 11:26:44 PM
hey sis!!! the description blow me over.. you know this poem is really very useful when you have abreakup and you need to relieve yourself of that pain although as i can see there are alot of angst in this poem thats always the case when you breakup right?

sometimes its hard to admit that its over for yourself and for the other one when you breakup but you know that if its not worth it for that relationship you should just let it go right? no sense making yourself suffer something not worth it. i know its a little crazy my texts is what i mean.... hmm. all in all i really like this poem you really are a good poet :)

--
Sex is like math: Add the bed, subtract the clothes, divide the legs, and pray to god you don't multiply. :giggle:

We come to love not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly :hug:
:icongabriel06:
~gabriel06 Dec 30, 2003, 11:39:04 PM
hey thanks for the nice poetry..
all i wanted was to be friends.. its the new year.. so i guess. i'll do something nice?? aww.. come on.. u cld be more gracious i hope..
y need to make 1 more enemy? when u can make a friend..
dats my policy.. its pretty fine if u aint able to do so..
:iconunattached:
~unattached Dec 31, 2003, 10:19:03 AM
hey! good poem. nice meaning. but i disagree with you. maybe he regrets breaking up with you and realized that he was wrong. are you going to hold it against him that he wants to apologize and be friends with you again? i can't say i haven't done the exact same thing to one of my ex's. just some advice. anyways enjoy the new year! talk to you soon!

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~trendwhore9d my big brother
~legionofmeanies my littl brother
~NotInStock my stock account
:iconkam1kaz1:
~kam1kaz1 Dec 31, 2003, 9:43:23 PM
just as awsome as before
:iconrangarig-dragon:
~rangarig-dragon Jan 1, 2004, 9:48:39 AM
That's life... -_-

--
[Never forget WHO and WHAT you are, for not everyone is able to live individual...]

~Ran
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~stiflersgirl Jan 1, 2004, 2:53:24 PM
glad to hear that you have someone in your life, pZ!! :hug: this was great writing... it shows so much emotion and there's no wonder what you truely think.. :clap: love it. :+fav:

--
I couldn't take it.
I found my replacement.
I'll never wake up next to you..

You wouldn't listen anymore.
No one listens anymore.
You couldn't give it anymore.
It's a blackout..
:iconleafinsectman:
~leafinsectman Jan 1, 2004, 3:54:34 PM
I got contacted by mine too. Its funny coz she's the one who discarded me :o Just like with you and the dude. I guess we're kinda on the same boat :puke:

Well at least Nina got a laugh out of it. It kinda makes me glad that after bringing me so much pain, she can bring some joy to someone I love. Weird eh? =D

Good luck with your dude :w00t:
:iconconjured:
~conjured Jan 10, 2004, 9:40:39 PM
well.......the poem seem to leave no space for any other interpretation.
hahaha....hope everything's fine now...? and back to being pZ-ish
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